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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no ro le for teachers in the classroom. v.1

technology plays their big role not only in education. Every field is depends on technology wheater it is the health sector, engineering, and another business field. it is wrong to say that soon there will be no teacher because without teacher students cannot set their daily time table. first and formost there are many advantages and disadvantages of the techology. for instance: when i was doing my placment in high school i have noticed that most of the tennegers were distracted towards tecnology. they were using computer for fun and for their social site. which does not help them to enhance their knoweldege. if there is a teacher in our life. teacher can show the right path to the students, so that students can maintain their schdule accoringly and mauintain discipline. teacher help students how to use computer. there are various thi gs to learn about computer too where teacher hellp students.
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in education. Every field is depends on technology
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to say that
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there will be no
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teacher
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without
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teacher
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students
cannot set their daily
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time table
.
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first
and
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formost
there are
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techology
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in high school
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have noticed that most of the
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tennegers
were distracted
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tecnology
.
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they
were using computer for fun and for their social site.
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them to enhance their
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in our life.
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teacher
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,
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can maintain their
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schdule
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and
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discipline.
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teacher
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IELTS academic As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no ro le for teachers in the classroom. v. 1

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152 words
5.0
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