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The table below gives information about UK independent films.

The data describes the number of independent movies created in the Republic of Ireland and the UK in 2012. In general, the two most popular genres were documentary and drama. In contrast, the highest income from tickets was from comedy movies. The lowest amount of releases had biotopic, action, romance, crime, and other genres, with a total number of releases 1, 4, 5, 7, and 8, respectively. Moreover, the average percentage was really similar compare to the previous numbers. However, the income from sales was not so compatible. For example, the income of biotopic film was 9. 1, but the romance had only 0. 8. Despite the fact, the number of releases of romance films was five times higher. Thriller and horror movies had around 13. 5 releases, plus, their percentage of all releases was approximately 9. 3%. Lastly, the most interesting independent movies were comedy with 26 releases, documentary, and drama with 35. However, the income of drama and documentary movies was much lower compared to comedy films. Inasmuch, comedy had the biggest income of all genres, almost 46%.
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of independent
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created in the Republic of Ireland and the UK in 2012.
In general
, the two most popular genres were documentary and drama.
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, the highest
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income
from tickets was from
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comedy
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The lowest amount of
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biotopic
, action, romance, crime, and other genres, with a total
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of
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1, 4, 5, 7, and 8,
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.
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0. 8. Despite the fact, the
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of
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of romance films was five times higher.

Thriller and horror
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had around 13. 5
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releases
, plus, their percentage of all
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was approximately 9. 3%.
Lastly
, the most interesting independent
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were
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comedy
with 26
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releases
, documentary, and drama with 35.
However
, the
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income
of drama and documentary
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movies
was much lower compared to
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comedy
films. Inasmuch,
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comedy
had the biggest
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income
of all genres, almost 46%.
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