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The charts below indicate the rate of using water in 3 different ways in six global areas in over the world

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The charts below indicate the rate of using water in 3 different ways in six global areas in over the world Overall, the consumption of water in agriculture was the highest and the domestic used was the lowest It is shown that in using water for agricultural, central asia, africa, south east asia and south America using water with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively, leaving NA at 39% and Europe at 32% Regarding NA and Europe about a half of water consuming in both areas for industry, taking up 48% and 53% in order. The rest four areas SEA SA A and CA at 12%, 10%, 7% and 5% in descending order The percentage of water for domestic use with 19% was the highest was SA. The europe and NA lower than 4% and 6%, occupied at 13% and 15% by given charts. The SA and CA has the same rate at 7% that lower than the africa at 9%. To conclude, agriculture always use water in planting the most than the domestic and industry use in living and working.
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consuming in both areas for industry, taking up 48% and 53% in order. The rest four areas SEA SA A and CA at 12%, 10%, 7% and 5% in descending order

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with 19% was the highest was SA.
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in planting the most than the domestic and industry
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in living and working.
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