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The diagram below shows the percentage of good quality river water in four countries from 1995 to 2018

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of good quality river water in four different nations between 1995 and 2018. Overall, while there was a significant fluctuation of the percentage of good quality river water in country C and D, those in the remaining countries witnessed a moderate change throughout the period in question. As can be seen from the given graph, the proportion of river water in good quality in country D rose significantly which was from under 85% to 92% in the first five years. In the next 8 years, the figure experienced a constant decline, then fluctuated roughly 87% before reaching a low of 84% in 2018 which was the same level as those in 10 previous years. As regards the percentage of country C’s good quality river water, it had a fluctuation around 87% during the given period. Despite starting at 94% which was lower than those in country A in 1995, the proportion of river water in good quality in country B registered a marked rise the next 15 years and hit the highest point of 96% in the last year after surpassing those in country A in 2013. Meanwhile, the figure in country A registered a minimal growth of 2% over a period of 15 years beginning from 1995 and was followed by a trailing behind country B until 2018.
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C and D, those in the remaining
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, it had a fluctuation around 87% during the
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A in 1995, the proportion of
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B registered a marked rise the
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A in 2013. Meanwhile, the figure in
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B until 2018.
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