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happy valley shoping centre(1982), happy valley shoping centre (2012)

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The diagrams illustrate some changes in the Happy Valley Shopping Center between two periods of time, 1982 an 2012. It is clear that the Happy Valley Shopping Center has changed considerably and six main new features can be seen in second picture. Different stores facilities are main devolopments in the area. Look at the maps in detail, we can see that more stores have been changed of the centre. The parking lot was build on the outskirts of the Happy Valley Shopping Center. Next, the lake near the center was destroy and furniture retail was build in this place, between 1982 and 2012. There were many various stores in Happy Valley Shopping Center. But by 2012, more stores had changed. Food store part has been destroyed and new sports store and electronics store are improved. Next to the the Coffee shop was completely destroyed. Lastly, sports, electronics and furniture stores were transfer themed restaurants and a food store was build next to them.

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some
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changes
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
Happy
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Valley
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Shopping
 Center between two periods of time, 1982 an 2012.

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clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
Happy
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Valley
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Shopping
 Center has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
 and six main new features can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in second picture. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
Different
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stores
 facilities are main Possible spelling mistake found.developments
devolopments
 in the area.

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see
 that more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 of the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. The parking lot was build on the outskirts of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
Happy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgorgecanyonbasinplainlowland
Valley
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Shopping
 Center. Next
, the lake near the center was Consider using a past participle here: "destroyed".destroyed
destroy
 and furniture retail was build in this place, between 1982 and 2012.

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many
 various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
Happy
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Valley
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Shopping
 Center. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 by 2012, more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. Food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 part has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and new sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and electronics You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. Next
 to Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
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destroyed
. Lastly
, sports, electronics and furniture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 were transfer themed restaurants and a food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 was build next
 to them. 