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the diagram illustrates the current structure of sports unit in university and proposed modifications. According to the diagram, currently it has one pool which is surrounded by changing room in the west, seats for audience in the right, gym in the north direction and reception at the entrance that is on the south. two outdoor courts are built besides the main unit which has 25m pool inside of it. the developments will widen the area by removing outdoor courts in the left side by replacing it with leisure pool. the changing rooms will locate next to it on the south. Similarly, the outdoor courts on eastern will be replaced with sports hall with changing room and a cafe in front of it at the bottom. a sports shop will appear west of the cafe.
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the
diagram illustrates the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
structure of sports unit in university and proposed modifications. According to the diagram,
currently
it has one pool which
is surrounded
by changing room in the west, seats for audience in the right, gym in the north direction and reception at the entrance
that is
on the south.
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two
outdoor courts
are built
besides
the main unit which has
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"
25m
pool
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "inside".
inside of
it. the developments will widen the area by removing outdoor courts in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side by replacing it with leisure pool.
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the
changing rooms will locate
next
to it on the south.
Similarly
, the outdoor courts on eastern will
be replaced
with sports hall with changing room and a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in front of it at the bottom.
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a
sports shop will appear west of the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.

IELTS academic diagram of previous sports unit.

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