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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare the proportions of Italian and Yemeni citizens in three age groups in 2000 and projections for 2050. It is clear that Yemen had the younger population in the year 2000, and the same is predicted for the year 2050. The populations of both countries are predicted to get older over the 50 year period. In 2000 just over half the Yemeni population were under 14, compared to just over 14% of Italians in the same age group. Only a very small percentage of people in Yemen were over 60 at 3. 6%, in contrast to nearly a quarter of the Italian population. The largest group for Italy was the 15-59-year-olds with just over 60% while Yemen had 46. 3% of its population in this category. Yemen’s average age is set to increase with the proportion of over 60s increasing by just over 2% and the middle group rising by 11%, leaving the youngest group with a decrease of nearly 13%. It is envisaged that by 2050 the number of people in Italy over 60 will jump to 42. 3%, the percentage of those in the youngest bracket will drop to 11. 5% and the share in the middle category will decrease to 46. 2%.
The pie charts compare the proportions of Italian and Yemeni citizens in three age
groups
in 2000 and projections for 2050.

It is
clear
that Yemen had the younger
population
in the year 2000, and the same
is predicted
for the year 2050. The
populations
of both countries
are predicted
to
get
older
over
the
50 year
period.

In 2000
just
over
half the Yemeni
population
were under 14, compared to
just
over
14% of Italians in the same age
group
.
Only
a
very
small
percentage of
people
in Yemen were
over
60 at 3. 6%,
in contrast
to
nearly
a quarter of the Italian
population
. The largest
group
for Italy was the 15-59-year-olds with
just
over
60% while Yemen had 46. 3% of its
population
in this category.

Yemen’s average age
is set
to increase with the proportion of
over
60s increasing by
just
over
2% and the middle
group
rising by 11%, leaving the youngest
group
with a decrease of
nearly
13%. It
is envisaged
that by 2050 the number of
people
in Italy
over
60 will jump to 42. 3%, the percentage of those in the youngest bracket will drop to 11. 5% and the share in the middle category will decrease to 46. 2%.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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