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The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in india from 1980 to 2012

The line grqph demonstrate the population of various kind of turtles consisting of lLeather back turtles, Green turtles, All species and Olive ridlet turtles living in India during 1980 and 2012. Overall, the graph of Leatherback turtles, Green turtles, and other all species turtles inhabit in India declined since 1984 with some fluctuation throughout 32 years, while there is a different patterned emerged of Olive ridley which started to rise from 1980 until 1996. However, the vary from 1997 to 2012. Interestingly, Leatherback turtles populations decrease to the lowest, while Olive ridley turtles increase to the highest among all kinds of turtles. Specifically, there are the equally amount of turtles at 100 in 1980. After 1980, the graph of Olive ridley turtles surge and reached the hifhest population in 1996 at the total of 140 turtles and then the graph vary until 2012. On the other hand, number Leatherback turtles rapidly decrease until 2012 to a low at approximately 60 of them was left. Turning to the remaining two type, eventhough the graph of Green turtles and All species turtles have some fluctuation, but it is mostly constant amount of turtles between 90 to 110 during this 32 year period.
The line
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grqph
demonstrate the population of various kind of
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turtles
consisting of
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lLeather
back
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turtles
, Green
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turtles
, All species and Olive
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ridlet
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turtles
living in India during 1980 and 2012.

Overall
, the
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graph
of
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Leatherback
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turtles
, Green
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turtles
, and other all species
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turtles
inhabit in India declined since 1984 with
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some
fluctuation throughout 32 years, while there is a
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different
patterned emerged of Olive
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ridley
which
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started
to rise from 1980 until 1996.
However
,
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the vary
from 1997 to 2012.
Interestingly
,
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Leatherback
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turtles
populations decrease to the lowest, while Olive
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ridley
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turtles
increase to the highest among all kinds of turtles.

Specifically
, there are the
equally
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amount
of
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at 100 in 1980. After 1980, the
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of Olive
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ridley
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turtles
surge and reached the
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hifhest
population in 1996 at the total of 140
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turtles
and then the
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graph
vary until 2012.
On the other hand
, number
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Leatherback
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turtles
rapidly
decrease until 2012 to a low at approximately 60 of them was
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left
.

Turning to the remaining two type,
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eventhough
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of Green
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turtles
and All species
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turtles
have
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some
fluctuation,
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but
it is
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constant amount of
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turtles
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between 90 to 110
during this
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32 year
period.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in india from 1980 to 2012

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