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The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about world spending and population. 0jVl
The pie charts compare the shares of four major items in global expenditure, as well as how global population is distributed. Overall, the largest proportion of money in the world is allocated to food, while transport, housing and clothing are other significant items. Moreover, the population of Asia is responsible for the largest group of humans. According to the first chart, the most significant amounts are paid for food (almost a quarter of global expenditure) and transport (almost 20%), while housing also accounts for a considerable proportion. The least among the four is spent on clothing (merely 6 percent) and the remaining 40% is spent on a variety of other items. The second chart shows that there is a significant difference between the population of Asia and that of other continents since approximately 3 out of every 5 human beings live in Asia. Europe and the Americas share similar proportions and together are host to roughly one-third of the world’s population, while the inhabitants of Africa form a mere one-tenth.
The pie charts compare the shares of four major items in global expenditure,
as well
as how global
population
is distributed
.
Overall
, the largest proportion of money in the world
is allocated
to food, while transport, housing and clothing are other significant items.
Moreover
, the
population
of Asia is responsible for the largest group of humans. According to the
first
chart, the most significant amounts
are paid
for food (almost a quarter of global expenditure) and transport (almost 20%), while housing
also
accounts for a considerable proportion. The least among the four
is spent
on clothing (
merely
6 percent) and the remaining 40%
is spent
on a variety of other items. The second chart
shows
that there is a significant difference between the
population
of Asia and that of other continents since approximately 3 out of every 5 human beings
live
in Asia. Europe and the Americas share similar proportions and together are host to roughly one-third of the world’s
population
, while the inhabitants of Africa form a mere one-tenth.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about world spending and population.

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