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The given diagram elucidates the production process of sugar which is carried out by a German company in detail stages. In general, it can be seen that there are 8 required steps beginning with harvesting sugarcane in the tropical regions and finishing with transporting the outcomes to supermarkets and restaurants. In the initial stage, the sugarcane plants are harvested which happens in tropical countries. Secondly, by running the crusher, juice is collected in a standard procedure. In the subsequent step, partial filtration is used to collect raw sugar. After that, raw sugar is delivered to Germany. Before performs the crystallization process, the raw sugar are melt and filtered to complete the purification. In the following stage, sugar crystals are dried before packaged. In the end of this process, packages of sugar crystal are transported to displayed on supermarket and restaurants for sales. By following this process, natural sugar are provided to the customers for use.

The given diagram elucidates the production process of sugar which is carried out by a German company in detail stages. In general, it can be seen that there are 8 required steps beginning with harvesting sugarcane in the tropical regions and finishing with transporting the outcomes to supermarkets and restaurants. In the initial stage, the sugarcane plants are harvested which happens in tropical countries. Secondly, by running the crusher, juice is collected in a standard procedure. In the subsequent step, partial filtration is used to collect raw sugar. After that, raw sugar is delivered to Germany. Before performs the crystallization process, the raw sugar are melt and filtered to complete the purification. In the following stage, sugar crystals are dried before packaged. In the end of this process, packages of sugar crystal are transported to displayed on supermarket and restaurants for sales. By following this process, natural sugar are provided to the customers for use. Pm6w

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