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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. 2Jjj
The above graph illustrates the number of male and female students graduated from university in canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, we can analyse that the female graduates are outnumbering the male graduates from 1992 to 2006. In the year 1992, the number of male students graduated were slightly above 70, 000, where as the female students graduated were around 1, 00, 000. There was a steady increase in the number of graduates up till the year 1996 which accounted for around 76000 male graduates and female graduates around, 1, 50, 000. Post 1996, the number of graduates gradually declined among both the genders. From the year 1998, there was slight fluctuation of male student graduates till 2002, then we can analyse the steady increase of male student graduates till the year 2006 by around 95, 000 graduates. In the year 2000, post the slight decline the female graduates in 1998, the female graduates followed a similar trend to male graduates with the increasing number of graduates and recorded the highest in the year 2006 by around 1, 50, 000 graduates.
The above graph illustrates the
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of male and
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female
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students
graduated from university in
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canada
from 1992 to 2007.

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that the
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female
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graduates
are outnumbering the male
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graduates
from 1992 to 2006.

In the
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1992, the
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of male
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students
graduated were
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above 70, 000,
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where as
the
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female
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students
graduated were
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around
1, 00, 000. There was a steady increase in the
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number
of
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graduates
up till the
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year
1996 which accounted for
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around
76000 male
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graduates
and
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female
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graduates
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around
, 1, 50, 000. Post 1996, the
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number
of
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graduates
gradually
declined among both the genders.

From the
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1998, there was slight fluctuation of male
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student
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graduates
till 2002, then we can
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the steady increase of male
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student
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graduates
till the
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year
2006 by
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around
95, 000 graduates.

In the
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year
2000, post the slight decline the
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female
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graduates
in 1998, the
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female
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graduates
followed a similar trend to male
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graduates
with the increasing
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number
of
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graduates
and recorded the highest in the
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year
2006 by
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around
1, 50, 000
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graduates
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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