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The charts below give information about us teenagers’ attitudes to social media

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The pie chart and the bar chart provide data on the proportion of adolescents' attitude to social sites and the causes they consider for the bad effect of social sites respectively. Overall, it can be seen that neitral effect accounts for the largest percentage and the most popular reason for negative effect of social media is bullying/rumor spreading. According to the figures, it is clear that youngsters consider that social sites have neither negative, nor positive influence on people of their age, approximately 44 percent think so. By contrary, the least popular answer was about the negative effect of the social media, this section represented the smallest proportion(24. As for bar chart, the largest percentage of teenagers highlighted that bullying/rumor spreading(27%) was the most significant reason for social sites having negative impact on teens. The second of the most popular answer to the question of reasons that caused not pleasant effect on children was harms relationships and in-person contact(17%).
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and the causes they consider for the
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accounts for the largest percentage and the most popular reason for
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negative
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of
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social
media is bullying/rumor spreading.

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that youngsters consider that
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have neither
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, nor
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positive
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people
of their age, approximately 44 percent
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think
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. By contrary, the least popular answer was about the
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negative
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of the
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social
media, this section represented the smallest proportion
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highlighted that bullying/rumor spreading(27%) was the most significant reason for
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social
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having
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impact on teens. The second of the most popular answer to the question of reasons that caused not pleasant
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on children was harms relationships and in-person contact(17%).

IELTS academic The charts below give information about us teenagers’ attitudes to social media

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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