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can not live without a past, it is our value of life. Beside it can help create your experiences and solve

can not live without a past, it is our value of life. Beside it can help create your experiences and solve 2KpKM
Moreover, success will not come without failure, everybody should make an attempt, even if it fails, and it may become a big success if they try it again and again. In addition, our past is our culture and heritage which we should not forget at all, it is a matter of value to our present and future, and will remain such till the day will die. To sum up, in my opinion, we can not live without a past, it is our value of life. Beside it can help create your experiences and solve your problems better in the future.
Moreover
, success will not
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come
without failure, everybody should
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make
an attempt, even if it fails, and it may become a
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big
success if they try it again and again.
In addition
, our past is our culture and heritage which we should not forget at all, it is a matter of value to our present and future, and will remain such till the day will
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die
.

To sum up, in my opinion, we can not
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live
without a past, it is our value of life. Beside it can
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help
create your experiences and solve your problems better in the future.
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IELTS academic can not live without a past, it is our value of life. Beside it can help create your experiences and solve

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100 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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