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Existing ground floor plan of a house

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The diagram gives information about an existing floor plan of a house and after some changes in the interior part of the home the proposed plan has shown. The current existing floor plan contains an internal door, an internal wall, storage which is under stairs, entrance door whereas in the proposed changes of the house hold almost all the planning rooms except storage under stairs has remain unchanged in addition to that they have included kitchen furniture As it can be seen previous floor plan is clumsy since all the rooms are located together, whereas in the changed plan the rooms are distributed. The left side of the main entrance door accommodate with two internal doors and the wall which is right side to the main entrance door and the internal door straight forward to entrance door and the storage under stairs all this are removed and replaced with stairs and make the living room bigger than previous. In the kitchen they include kitchen furniture and also the internal door which placed at starting of kitchen is more convenient for people to enter into kitchen.
The diagram gives information about an existing floor
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plan
of a
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house
and after
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some
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changes
in the interior part of the home the proposed
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plan
has shown.

The
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current
existing floor
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plan
contains an
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internal
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door
, an
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internal
wall, storage which is under stairs,
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entrance
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door
whereas in the proposed
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changes
of the
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house
hold almost all the planning
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rooms
except storage under stairs has
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remain
unchanged
in addition
to that they have included
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kitchen
furniture

As it can be
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seen
previous floor
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plan
is clumsy since all the
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rooms
are located
together, whereas in the
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changed
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plan
the
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rooms
are distributed
. The
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left
side of the main
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entrance
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door
accommodate with two
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internal
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doors
and the wall which is right side to the main
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entrance
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door
and the
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internal
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door
straight forward to
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entrance
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door
and the storage under stairs all this
are removed
and replaced with stairs and
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make
the living
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room
bigger than previous. In the
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kitchen
they include
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kitchen
furniture and
also
the
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internal
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door
which placed at starting of
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kitchen
is more convenient for
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people
to enter into
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kitchen
.
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IELTS academic Existing ground floor plan of a house

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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