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The charts below display the percentage of computer aided technology application in different sectors in Britain recently.

The charts below display the percentage of computer aided technology application in different sectors in Britain recently. 96J2X

The following pie charts show the percentage of computer assistant technology presentation in other sectors in Britain a moment ago. Overall, it is obvious that motor vehicles is the most popular in 2010, whereas the percentage of consumer products is the highest in 2015. First of all, motor vehicles made up the highest percentage of computer assistant technology, at 31. 70%, while a consumer product was ranked second, with the figure standing at 18. 40%. The next popular percentage of processor assistant was business machines, which was 11. 20%. Meanwhile, the least popular were medical, academic, aerospace, the others and government, at 8. 80%; 8. 60%; 8. 20%; 7. 70%; and 5. 50% respectively in 2010. Besides, the highest percentage of consumer products of computer assistant, this was 28. 40%. Motor vehicles decreased sharply by 11. 70% in 2015. The percentage of business machines decreased slightly in 2015, with 8. 00%. However, medical increased 12. 00% in 2015. With regard to the academic, it increased dramatically to 18. 60%. Aerospace, government, and the others drop to 8. 20%; 3. 50%; and 2. 80%. In short, the total percentage of computer assistant technology in other sectors in Britain decreased slightly than 2015

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