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The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia

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The bar graph illustrates the water storage capacity of 6 cities in Australia from October 2009 to October 2010. By comparing the given data, it can be observed that Brisbane's water storage capacity did not change. At the same time, the water storage capacity in Sydney increased by 7% approximately in October 2010. A significant rise in storage capacity can also be observed in Melbourne, Perth by 10% and 20% respectively. Canberra city records the highest level of water storage increase with 22%. Although most of the towns expanded their water storage capacity, Darmin showed a decline in water storage capacity. By 8% decrease, Darwin became the only city with the lowest water storage capacity out of the other 5 cities Overall, one of the cities remained constant in storage capacity and the other witnessed a dip. The remaining 4 cities were able to store more water.
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in Australia from October 2009 to October 2010. By comparing the
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did not
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in Sydney increased by 7% approximately in October 2010. A significant rise in
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in Melbourne, Perth by 10% and 20%
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increase with 22%. Although most of the towns expanded their
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. By 8% decrease, Darwin became the
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and the other witnessed a dip. The remaining 4
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IELTS academic The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia

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