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The chart shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The chart shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. dPOo

The provided bar graph illustrates the data about a country's export business with a further classification of its earnings in between the years 2015 to 2016. As depicted in the picture first and foremost category is petroleum products which had rose only 3% in the year 2016 over year 2015 in contrast it is the highest reaping category. On the other hand engineered goods uplifted their profits to 8. 5% whereas Agricultural products climbed a little to 0. 81%. Furthermore category soar up to 15. 24% in the year 2016 compared to 2015 which is textile category. Assimilating among categories on one hand the petroleum products and engineered goods attained significant amount of earning, on the other hand they had considered range of difference between their percentage of earnings in the year 2015 to 2016. Gems and Jewellery category seeming steadily with little ammount of reduction in its level, it is reduced to 5. 18% in 2016 compared to the before year. Alongside the agricultural products and textile categories followed upward trend in year 2016 than in the year 2015. As per the statistics, agriculture products has tedious change in which other categories excluding Gems and Jewellery got uplifted.

The provided bar graph illustrates the data about a country's export business with a further
 classification of its earnings in between the years 2015 to 2016.

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category
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products
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rose
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only
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year
 2016 over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015 in contrast
 it is the highest reaping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
. On the other hand
 engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 uplifted their profits to 8. 5% whereas Agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 climbed a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 to 0. 81%. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
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category
 soar up to 15. 24% in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2016 compared to 2015 which is textile category.

Assimilating among You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 on one hand the petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 attained significant amount of earning, on the other hand
 they had considered range of difference between their percentage of earnings in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015 to 2016. Gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'Jewellery' is British English.Jewelry
Jewellery
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
 seeming steadily
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
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ammount
 of reduction in its level, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 5. 18% in 2016 compared to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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year
. Alongside the agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and textile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 followed upward trend in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2016 than in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2015.

As per the statistics, agriculture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 has tedious This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in which other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
categories
 excluding Gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'Jewellery' is British English.Jewelry
Jewellery
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 uplifted. 