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The graph Below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph Below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. KN2N
The pie diagram illustrates the disposal of hazardous waste and comparisons of its quantities between USA, UK and Malasia in the year 2000. Overall data illustrated is landfill, recycled and disposed waste products, such as industrial chemicals, clinical waste, electronic waste and plastic bags. In contrast with the aggregate value of USA, UK and Malaysia in the year 2000. An initial analysis represents the industrial chemicals which are landfilled occupied major half in USA where as it is only 10 and 20 million tons in UK and Malaysia. Clinical waste is 28 million tons in USA on the other hand it was 9 million & 22 million in UK and Malaysia in the year 2000. Another trend that can be observed that electronic waste and plastic bags disposals were higher more in USA which were 14 million and 60 million. Additionally these two discards were only 12 million and 32 million in UK, on the other side they were 7 million and 50 million in Malaysia. It is worth pointing out that the landfill waste acquired major part in USA, second highest in UK comparitively Malaysia and UK equals analogues. UK in disposed category where as its only below 20% in USA. However it should be pointed out that the recycled waste is 25% in Malaysia, whereas it is 30% in USA, adding another percent it is in UK.
The pie diagram illustrates the disposal of hazardous
waste
and comparisons of its quantities
between USA
, UK and
Malasia
in the year 2000.

Overall
data illustrated is landfill, recycled and disposed
waste
products, such as industrial chemicals, clinical
waste
, electronic
waste
and plastic bags.
In contrast
with the aggregate value
of USA
, UK and Malaysia in the year 2000.

An initial analysis represents the industrial chemicals which are
landfilled
occupied major half
in USA
where as
it is
only
10 and 20
million
tons in UK and Malaysia. Clinical
waste
is 28
million
tons
in USA
on the other hand
it was 9
million
& 22
million
in UK and Malaysia in the year 2000.

Another trend that can
be observed
that electronic
waste
and plastic bags disposals were higher more
in USA
which were 14
million
and 60
million
.
Additionally
these two discards were
only
12
million
and 32
million
in UK, on the other side they were 7
million
and 50
million
in Malaysia.

It is worth pointing out that the landfill
waste
acquired major part
in USA
, second highest in UK
comparitively
Malaysia and UK equals analogues. UK in disposed category
where as
its
only
below 20%
in USA
.
However
it should
be pointed
out that the recycled
waste
is 25% in Malaysia, whereas it is 30%
in USA
, adding another percent it is in UK.
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IELTS academic The graph Below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries.

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