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The graph Below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph Below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. KN2N

The pie diagram illustrates the disposal of hazardous waste and comparisons of its quantities between USA, UK and Malasia in the year 2000. Overall data illustrated is landfill, recycled and disposed waste products, such as industrial chemicals, clinical waste, electronic waste and plastic bags. In contrast with the aggregate value of USA, UK and Malaysia in the year 2000. An initial analysis represents the industrial chemicals which are landfilled occupied major half in USA where as it is only 10 and 20 million tons in UK and Malaysia. Clinical waste is 28 million tons in USA on the other hand it was 9 million & 22 million in UK and Malaysia in the year 2000. Another trend that can be observed that electronic waste and plastic bags disposals were higher more in USA which were 14 million and 60 million. Additionally these two discards were only 12 million and 32 million in UK, on the other side they were 7 million and 50 million in Malaysia. It is worth pointing out that the landfill waste acquired major part in USA, second highest in UK comparitively Malaysia and UK equals analogues. UK in disposed category where as its only below 20% in USA. However it should be pointed out that the recycled waste is 25% in Malaysia, whereas it is 30% in USA, adding another percent it is in UK.

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