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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. GPVQ
The pie chart conveys the results of a survey conducted in 1999 about four main tourist attractions in Britain. Prominent tourists locations were- Historic houses & Monuments, Museums & galleries, Theme parks, Wildlife parks and zoos. Along with this, we are provided with a table about the proportion of people visiting Theme parks. Parks and zoos were the least visited spots at 9 per cent only followed by Historical monuments at 16 per cent. It appears that people are extremely enthusiastic about arts, considering Museums and galleries were the second-most toured site at 37 percent. There are a plethora of theme parks in Britain, among which, the Blackpool pleasure beach and Alton Towers comes across as the most popular ones with the number of people exploring them to be 47% and 17% respectively. Overall, Theme parks seem to be the preferred choice of tourists with 38 per cent of people visiting them given the thrill for adventure and excitement in their lives.
The pie chart conveys the results of a survey conducted in 1999 about four main tourist attractions in Britain. Prominent tourists locations were- Historic
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houses
& Monuments, Museums & galleries,
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Theme
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parks
, Wildlife
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parks
and zoos. Along with this, we
are provided
with a table about the proportion of
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people
visiting
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Theme
parks.

Parks and zoos were the least visited spots at 9 per cent
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only
followed by Historical monuments at 16 per cent. It appears that
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people
are
extremely
enthusiastic about arts, considering Museums and galleries were the second-most toured site at 37 percent.

There are a plethora of
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theme
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parks
in Britain, among which, the Blackpool pleasure beach and Alton Towers
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comes
across as the most popular ones with the number of
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people
exploring them to be 47% and 17%
respectively
.

Overall
,
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Theme
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parks
seem to be the preferred choice of tourists with 38 per cent of
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people
visiting them
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given
the thrill for adventure and excitement in their
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lives
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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