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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used it to produce electricity

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The diagrams represents the process of how geothermal power plant generate electricity by using cold water and generator. Overall, it is noticeable that it has 5 procedures from injecting cold water to the ground and culminated with powered the generator to make energy. Moreover, this process depends on the natural resources, which is hot rocks that located underground to make a production well. To start, cold water from the storage was pumped down 4. 5km underground into the chamber and inject the water to the Geothermal zone. In addition, after the hot water has been produced, the water pumped up and go in the condenser above the ground. Consequently, the water in the condenser turn into steam and powered the turbine, which connected to the generator. Furthermore, the generator was powered and produce electricity. Finally, the electricity transfer to urban and rural area.
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the process of how geothermal power plant generate electricity by using
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and generator.

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to the ground and culminated with powered the generator to
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make
energy.
Moreover
, this process depends on the natural resources, which is hot rocks that located underground to
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make
a production well.

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,
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cold
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water
from the storage
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underground into the chamber and inject the
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water
to the Geothermal zone.
In addition
, after the hot
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water
has
been produced
, the
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water
pumped up and go in the condenser above the ground.

Consequently
, the
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water
in the condenser turn into steam and powered the turbine, which connected to the generator.
Furthermore
, the generator
was powered
and produce electricity.
Finally
, the electricity transfer to urban and rural area.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used it to produce electricity

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