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The chart shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2015 and 2016. Summarise the information and reporting the main features.

The chart shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2015 and 2016. mp6d
The graph compares the export revenue from five types of product in 2015 and 2016, there is also a chart which illustrates the proportional variation in amounts of the same items in the same period. Overall, incomes by exporting, from all of the commodities, have increased in 2016 except gems and jewellery. The maximum amount of earnings has gained from petroleum products which are marginally ahead of engineered goods. In 2015, the highest amount of revenue earner is petroleum commodities (61 billion) though it grows only 3% in 2016. Whereas the engineered products have enhanced the second highest 8. 5% and stable at 62 billion in 2016. On the other hand, the only item that has experienced a downward trend is gems and jewellery ( 43 billion in 2015 and 41 billion in 2016). The textile stocks have encountered a maximum positive change of 15. 24% though there is no significant deviation in the agricultural category which is only 0. 81%.
The graph compares the export revenue from five types of product in 2015 and 2016, there is
also
a chart which illustrates the proportional variation in amounts of the same items in the same period.

Overall
, incomes by exporting, from
all of the
commodities, have increased in 2016 except gems and
jewellery
. The maximum amount of earnings has gained from petroleum products which are
marginally
ahead of engineered
goods
.

In 2015, the highest amount of revenue earner is petroleum commodities (61
billion)
though it grows
only
3% in 2016.
Whereas
the engineered products have enhanced the second highest 8. 5% and stable at 62
billion
in 2016.

On the other hand
, the
only
item that has experienced a downward trend is gems and
jewellery
(
43
billion
in 2015 and 41
billion
in 2016). The textile stocks have encountered a maximum
positive
change
of 15. 24% though there is no significant deviation in the agricultural category which is
only
0. 81%.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2015 and 2016.

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  American English
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