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the graph below gives information from at 2008 report about conservation of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the
table illustrates how much oil
was produced
since 2010 and is forecast to
be produced
until 2040 in six
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different
countries in
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million
of barrels.
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over
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aur
petrol and oil as an energy
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source
was the most
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famous
in
also
acted to be in the future various renewable
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sources
were
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used
list and the same is forecast to happen. To
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begin
with petrol and construction of which fluctuated in the
first
two decades reaching at 35 in 2000 same as the level of the starting year. Following a moderate rise it
is estimated
to amount to approximately 50 in 2030.
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in
the case of call and natural gas the former was
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used
list in the letter in the beginning year with around 17 and 20
respectively
. 10 conjunction of both has
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ryzen
gradually
and what exactly the same in 2015 (25). It
is anticipated
that usage of call will exceed nature gas
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totalling
almost 30. The
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use
of natural gas is forecast to plateau at 25 till 2030.
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on
the other hand with regard to the remaining
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sources
few
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changes
and lease conceptions was and is likely to
be noticed
in their
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use
.
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Desh
to adjust under 5 in 1980.
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nuclear
power how your accident renewable
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sources
and the figure has levelled off at almost 10 since 2005. In
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2030 it
is projected
that its usage will be almost identical.
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in
reference to solar and wind or
slightly
growth
is projected
to
be observed
and the
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used
is likely to be dead above 5. The USA is
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to
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as much hydropower as it did in 1980.
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