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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. k9LO
The given line chart depicts the unemployment rate in Australia, comprises of rural area and urban area and escalated over four quarters of the year 2012. The chart compares the significant diversification in rate of cutback in rustic regions, which is declined at the end of year and the suburban area, which has drastically variated throughout the year and at highest peak as year ends. The country side, unemployment rate is at its highest peak, when the year commences. Although as the year passes the percentage is declining from 6. 5 to 4. 5 between first quarter to middle of second quarter. At the end of fourth quarter the rate is showing modulated change in unemployment rate. However, the metropolitan area has the downsized cutoff rate in the initial part of the year, which has its first spike during the second quarter and has its highest crest in the last quarter of the year. The given chart clearly shows that the percentage change in unemployment rate gravitates to be descended in suburban area while it tends to be higher in the rural parts in the commencing year. It is evident from the chart that the proportion of conversion rate in countryside is minor while in the metropolitan area is the utmost.
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given
line
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chart
depicts the
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unemployment
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rate
in Australia,
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comprises of
rural
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area
and urban
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area
and escalated over four
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quarters
of the
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year
2012. The
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chart
compares the significant diversification in
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rate
of cutback in rustic regions, which
is declined
at the
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end
of
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year
and the suburban
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area
, which has
drastically
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variated
throughout the
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year
and at highest peak as
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year
ends.

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The
country side,
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unemployment
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rate
is at its highest peak, when the
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year
commences.
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Although
as the
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year
passes the percentage is declining from 6. 5 to 4. 5 between
first
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quarter
to middle of second
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quarter
. At the
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end
of fourth
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the
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rate
is showing modulated
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change
in
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unemployment
rate.

However
, the metropolitan
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area
has the downsized cutoff
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rate
in the initial part of the
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year
, which has its
first
spike during the second
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quarter
and has its highest crest in the last
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quarter
of the year.

The
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chart
clearly
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shows
that the percentage
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change
in
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unemployment
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rate
gravitates to
be descended
in suburban
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area
while it tends to be higher in the rural parts in the commencing
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year
. It is evident from the
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chart
that the proportion of conversion
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rate
in countryside is minor while in the metropolitan
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area
is the utmost.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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