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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the percentage of people in Australia looking for a job in rural and urban areas in 2012. Overall, unemployment was higher in rural areas as compared to urban areas in the beginning of the year. Both areas shows opposite trends in the middle of the year. It reaches at almost same point in the last phase of the year. Around 2% people of the city were looking for jobs in the initial phase of the 1st quarter. On the contrary, around 6. 9% villagers were seeking job opportunities. At the start of 2nd quarter, the number fell down to 4. 5% in remote areas whereas it increased to 4% in metro areas. There is opposite trend for both the areas. From second quarter onwards, people living in cities found it easy to get jobs which resulted in the decline of unemployment up to around 2%. However, this number increased in rural areas and reached up to around 5. 5%. Third quarter shows a steep increase in unemployment in urban areas touching the 4% mark and further increasing to almost 5% in the middle of fourth quarter. On the contrary, this rate is almost same in remote areas. It is showing slight variation only. It remains around 5% from 3rd quarter onwards till the middle of fourth quarter.
The chart illustrates the percentage of
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people
in Australia looking for a
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job
in rural and urban
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areas
in 2012.

Overall
, unemployment was higher in rural
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areas
as compared to urban
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areas
in the beginning of the year. Both
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areas
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opposite trends in the middle of the year. It reaches at almost same point in the last phase of the year.

Around 2%
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people
of the city were looking for
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jobs
in the initial phase of the 1st
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.
On the contrary
,
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around
6. 9% villagers were seeking
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job
opportunities. At the
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start
of 2nd
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quarter
, the number fell down to 4. 5% in remote
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areas
whereas it increased to 4% in metro
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areas
. There is opposite trend for both the
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areas
. From second
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onwards,
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people
living in cities found it easy to
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get
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jobs
which resulted in the decline of unemployment up to
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around
2%.
However
, this number increased in rural
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and reached up to
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around
5. 5%.

Third
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shows
a steep increase in unemployment in urban
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areas
touching the 4% mark and
further
increasing to almost 5% in the middle of fourth
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quarter
.
On the contrary
, this rate is almost same in remote
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areas
. It is showing slight variation
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only
. It remains
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around
5% from 3rd
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onwards till the middle of fourth
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