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the graph belove gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some interesting data concerning the amount of money invested on petrol by the United States and the United Kingdom, are revealed in the graph. The data are grouped into three categories that are the poorest people, those with a middle income and the richest one. The most significant fact is that while in the Unites state the trend is downward throughout the three groups, in the United Kingdom is upward. Moving to a more detailed analysis, for the poorest people in the UK, the consume of petrol start at a 0, 5% of their income whereas in America accounts for almost the 4%. With the rise of the income in UK, a sharp increase of the usage of petrol occurs simultaneously. First of all, it more than doubles nearly reaching a 3% before switching to the income of the middle group, and then it steadily goes up in the middle-income and richest group, closing the trend at a 3, 5%. Moreover, A peak of 4% is hit in the richest band. For the US, instead, there is a different tendency, with a peak of a bit above the 5% in the poorest’s income, followed by a dramatic drop over the consume of the middle-income group, a significant low of approximately 2. 5% is touched by the people with the highest wage.
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interesting data concerning the amount of money invested on petrol by the United States and the United Kingdom,
are revealed
in the graph. The data
are grouped
into three categories that are the poorest
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people
, those with a middle
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income
and the richest one. The most significant fact is that while in the Unites state the trend is downward throughout the three
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groups
, in the United Kingdom is upward.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, for the poorest
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people
in the UK,
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the consume
of petrol
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start
at a 0, 5% of their
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income
whereas in America accounts for almost the 4%.

With the rise of the
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income
in UK, a sharp increase of the usage of petrol occurs
simultaneously
.
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First of all
, it more than doubles
nearly
reaching a 3%
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before
switching to the
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income
of the middle
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group
, and then it
steadily
goes up in the middle-income and richest
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group
, closing the trend at a 3, 5%.
Moreover
, A peak of 4%
is hit
in the richest band.

For the US,
instead
, there is a
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different
tendency, with a peak of a bit above the 5% in the poorest’s
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income
, followed by a dramatic drop over
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the consume
of the middle-income
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group
, a significant low of approximately 2. 5%
is touched
by the
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people
with the highest wage.
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IELTS academic the graph belove gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

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