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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the comparison of unemployment rate between urban areas and rural areas in Australia in the year 2012. The blue line indicates the unemployment rate of rural area. In the first quarter there were 7% people who were jobless in the country and it is the highest percentage among all four quarters, where as only 2% people in the urban area remaind workless in the first span. Subsquently the rate of unwaged individual in the developed region kept on increasing. Consequently it fell down drastically from 4% to 2% in the third quarter. If we look at the situation of rural sector the lowest rate was in the second half that is 4. 5% approximately. However, the unemployment rate of urban sector started raising from third quarter of the year and reached a new height all the way into the fouth quarter that is 5%.
The line graph
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shows
the comparison of unemployment
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rate
between urban
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areas
and rural
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areas
in Australia in the year 2012.

The blue line indicates the unemployment
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rate
of rural
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area
. In the
first
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quarter
there were 7%
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people
who were jobless in the
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country and
it is the highest percentage among all four
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quarters
,
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where as
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only
2%
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people
in the urban
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area
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remaind
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workless
in the
first
span.
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Subsquently
the
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rate
of unwaged individual in the developed region
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kept
on increasing.
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Consequently
it fell down
drastically
from 4% to 2% in the third
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quarter
.
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If
we look at the situation of rural sector the lowest
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rate
was in the second half
that is
4. 5% approximately.

However
, the unemployment
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rate
of urban sector
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started
raising from third
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quarter
of the year and reached a new height all the way into the
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fouth
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quarter
that is
5%.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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