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The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.

The pie chart compares the constancy of adulthood which shop on the internet in the United States in 2015, while the bar chart demonstrates a more detailed data about online and offline purchases. Overall, the highest proportion of the maturity shop less often on an online platform. Moreover, the highest number of adults who prefer shopping in physical stores are less frequent online shoppers. However, according to the bar chart the smallest quantity of individuals are those who shop less frequently online and purchase their items on the internet. The highest number of adults were those who shopped less frequently on the internet with 37%. As shown in the pie chart, only three twentieth proportion of individuals shop weekly which was the lowest proportion of those individuals. Furthermore, those who never shopped on an online platform reached the amount of 20% out of 100. Only 28 out of 100 maturity shoppers purchased their goods a few times a month. According to the bar chart, the less frequent online shoppers faced both the highest proportion of purchases online and offline in shops with about 81% who shopped in physical stores and just 18% who shopped online. The second highest proportion of individuals who purchased goods online were the weekly shoppers reaching a number of about 62%. This was followed by monthly online shoppers and all online shoppers who spent between the range of 30% to 42% in total of their purchases on the internet.
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compares the constancy of adulthood which
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on the internet in the United States in 2015, while the bar
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demonstrates a more detailed data about
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and offline
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purchases
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of the maturity
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shop
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on an
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online
platform.
Moreover
, the highest number of adults
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prefer shopping in physical stores are
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frequent
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online
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.
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the smallest quantity of
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individuals
are those
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shop
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less
frequently
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online
and
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purchase
their items on the internet.

The highest number of adults were those
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on the internet with 37%. As shown in the pie
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,
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weekly which was the lowest
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never
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platform reached the amount of 20% out of 100.
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a few times a month.

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, the
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faced both the highest
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with about 81%
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in physical stores and
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were the weekly
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reaching a number of about 62%. This
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spent between the range of 30% to 42% in total of their
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purchases
on the internet.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the frequency of U. S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.

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