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The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls from 1995-2002.

The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls from 1995-2002. weqwq
The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls from 1995-2002. Overall, local fixed-line calls were the most popular over the whole period, with national and international calls and calls on mobiles second and third respectively. However, the number of minutes spent on international and national calls and mobiles both increased over the period; with mobile minutes increasing dramatically. Minutes spent on local calls fluctuated over the time period, with just over 70 billion minutes in 1995, peaking at approximately 90 billion in 1999 and then steadily decreasing to just over 70 billion minutes in 2002. National and international calls increased steadily year on year, from just under 40 billion minutes in 1995 to a peak of just over 60 billion in 2002. There was a dramatic increase in mobile calls from 2 billion to 44 billion minutes over the period. Mobile phone usage nearly doubled from approximately 24 billion minutes in 2000 to 44 billion in 2001.
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types of telephone
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calls
from 1995-2002.

Overall
, local
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fixed
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were the most popular
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over
the whole
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period
, with national and international
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calls
and
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on mobiles second and third
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, the number of minutes spent on international and national
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calls
and mobiles both increased
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over
the
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period
; with mobile minutes increasing
dramatically
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Minutes spent on local
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fluctuated
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the time
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period
, with
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just
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70
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minutes in 1995, peaking at approximately 90
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in 1999 and then
steadily
decreasing to
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70
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billion
minutes in 2002.

National and international
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calls
increased
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under 40
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minutes in 1995 to a peak of
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60
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billion
in 2002.

There was a dramatic increase in mobile
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calls
from 2
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billion
to 44
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billion
minutes
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. Mobile phone usage
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minutes in 2000 to 44
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