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The graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime.

The graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime. k6PMR
The bar chart show us comparison of percentage of people’sense towards crime and actual likelihood to be a victime of crime from 2009 to 2010 Overall, more people fear of being a victime of offense but the reality was not lke what they wanted. From 2009 to 2010, the highest percentage of crime type was car crime People’s perception towards crime fall down in each type of crime. The feeling danger of burglary and violent crime had slightly changed in 2009 and the same proportion in 2010. Anxiety of being car crime victime become a peak to 21% in 2009 and 18% in 2010 Actually, crime was not scary as their arguments. A little increase of burgalry and violent crime occurred between 2009 and 2010 while car crime contrast with the others. Percentage of actual likelihood of being a victime of crime was 4% in 2009 and 3, 5% in 2010
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from 2009 to 2010

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type was car crime

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fall down in each type of
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of burglary and violent
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in 2009 and the same proportion in 2010. Anxiety of being car
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become a peak to 21% in 2009 and 18% in 2010

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was not scary as their arguments. A
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increase of
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occurred between 2009 and 2010 while car
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contrast with the others.

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was 4% in 2009 and 3, 5% in 2010
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