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The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014

The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014 odKV

The line graph depicts the amount of different types of jam, sold in the period of 2009-2014. It could be plainly viewed, that all kinds of jam experienced oscillations, followed by steady upward trend, excepting a plum, which in the beginning constituted about 2. 5 millions, exactly equal to the raspberry, but unlike it, plum lost almost 0. 5 millions each year and in 2014 hit a low of 0 millions sold. Reverse trend can be seen in the grape sales: starting with 0. 5 millions it each year grew in 0. 6-0. 8 millions, run up to 4. 5 millions in 2014. At the same time, the highest position in the most of period was held by strawberry. In 2005 nearly 3. 1-3. 2 millions was consumed. It is worth noticing that while the sales of strawberry markedly rose, cherry and raspberry lost the buyers and vice versa. Such trend notable in 2011, when raspberry and cherry decreased to 3. 5 and 2 millions, strawberry reached 4. 5. And in 2014 strawberry peaked with 7 millions, while cherry lost 0. 2-0. 3.

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