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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart provides information on proportion of male and female who qualified their driving tests in one asian nation, over a period of thirty-years between 1980 and 2010. Overall, the data revels that women passed more percentage of driving tests as compare to men. Women showed fluctation while men experiend gradual increased and latter became stagnant. From 1998 to 2000, more percantge of women passed the driving test than men in the same period. In 1998, nearly 50 % of women passed the test as compared to about 30 % of men. Similar trends can be experiend in the year 1990 and 2000, in which women passed driving test slighly higher than 50% in 1990 and almost 70% in 2000 and men passed the driving test approximately 40% in 1990 and about 50% in 2000. In 2010, Although the rate of passing the driving test was higher in case of women, the percentage droped around 5%. With regard to men, they had maintaind 2000 level, which was around 50 percent.
The chart provides information on proportion of male and female who qualified their
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nation, over a period of thirty-years between 1980 and 2010.

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, the data revels that
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women
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passed
more percentage of
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driving
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tests
as compare to
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men
.
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Women
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fluctation
while
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experiend
gradual increased and latter became stagnant.

From 1998 to 2000, more
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percantge
of
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women
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passed
the
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than
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men
in the same period. In 1998,
nearly
50 % of
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women
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passed
the
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as compared to about 30 % of
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men
. Similar trends can be
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experiend
in the year 1990 and 2000, in which
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women
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passed
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driving
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test
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slighly
higher than 50% in 1990 and almost 70% in 2000 and
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men
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passed
the
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driving
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approximately 40% in 1990 and about 50% in 2000.

In 2010, Although the rate of passing the
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driving
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test
was higher in case of
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women
, the percentage
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droped
around 5%. With regard to
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, they had
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maintaind
2000 level, which was around 50 percent.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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