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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019.

This bar chart illustrate comparative between the percentage men tutor and women tutor in six kind of educational centers in British in 2019. Overall female teachers outnumbered male teachers in 3 types of these centers. And male teachers outnumbered female teachers in 2 type of these centers. Women teachers outnumbered men teachers at nursery and primary school. Also men teachers are more than women in private training institute and university lecturers. There were as female teacher in college as male teacher. The most percentages of male tutor is just over 60 at university lecturers and for women is just over 90 at per-school. Also The lees percentages of male is just under 5 at per-school and for female is just under 50 at private training institute.
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tutor and women tutor in six kind of educational centers in British in 2019.

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outnumbered male
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in 3 types of these centers. And male
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outnumbered
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in 2 type of these centers.

Women
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at nursery and primary school.
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Also
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are more than women in private training institute and university lecturers. There were as
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in college as male teacher.

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over 60 at university lecturers and for women is
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over 90 at per-school.
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under 5 at per-school and for
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under 50 at private training institute.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019.

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