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The chart below shows the result of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities

The chart shows in five Australian cities, people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit was considered. It is true that in four Australian cities apart from Adelaida, going to a cafe for coffee or tea predominated over the others. In last four weeks, in Melbourne, under 65% people bought fresh coffee. Also, in Hobart, buying fresh coffee was pricely the same as Melbourne. In both Brisbane and Adelaida, purchasing fresh coffee considerably decreased in comparison to other cities. In both cities, under 35% bought fresh coffee in the last four weeks. Else, In Brisbane, 55% people prefered going to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea. Turning to buying instant, it constituted of over 50%. The most striking feature this is that in Adelaida, buying instant coffee inconsiderably outnumber among buying fresh coffee and going to a cafe compared to others, in last four week
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities

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