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The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001, and the pie chart gives information about the library’s membership in 2010.

The bar graph compares the various genre of books burrowed from Lammertown public library in the year 1991 and 2001 while, the pie chart illustrates the data of men and women member of library in the year 2010. Overall, Romance books records as the most popular while language books were among least burrowed from library in both years. Moreover, women outnumbered the men percentage in acquiring membership of library. In 1991, around 500 crime books were taken from library where it decreased to almost 220 in 10 years. The leased book of autobiograties remained constant to 390 throughout the 10 years while, the language books accounted for the least popular in 2001 with 200, despite the double increment from 1991. In addition, around 650 number of children’s fiction books reported to be taken from library which declined to 390 till 2001. However, self-improvements books record the highest increment to reach almost 1000 from 200 whereas romance books also increased with 400 to peaked the chart in a decade. Similarly, thriller accounted around 650 books burrowed in 1991 and rose to almost 830 till 2001.
The bar graph compares the various genre of
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1991 and 2001 while, the pie chart illustrates the data of
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and women member of library in the
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2010.

Overall
, Romance
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records as the most popular while language
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were among least burrowed from library in both years.
Moreover
, women outnumbered the
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men
percentage in acquiring membership of library.

In 1991, around 500 crime
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books
were taken
from library where it decreased to almost 220 in 10 years. The leased
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of
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autobiograties
remained constant to 390 throughout the 10 years while, the language
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accounted for the least popular in 2001 with 200, despite the double increment from 1991.
In addition
, around 650 number of children’s fiction
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books
reported to
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from library which declined to 390 till 2001.

However
, self-improvements
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record the highest increment to reach almost 1000 from 200 whereas romance
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also
increased with 400 to peaked the chart in a decade.
Similarly
, thriller accounted around 650
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books
burrowed in 1991 and rose to almost 830 till 2001.
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