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The chart shows the information related to the people within 15 minutes travel service is it practical region of in UK also compares the people living in the urban area and the people living in a ruler area right report for the university listen and the firm given below

The chart shows the information related to the people within 15 minutes travel service is it practical region of in UK also compares the people living in the urban area and the people living in a ruler area right report for the university listen and the firm given below BYwkj
The given bar graph compares the action to Dr post office primary school and secondary school in city and countryside people it is a special region in the United Kingdom of Great Britain overall it can be seen that almost all urban people within 15 minutes drive to the services The percentage of the ruler area people have access to medical facilities there are also within the 15 minutes drive to Dr similarly secondary school can be related 15 minutes journey from the village and city. all city people have post office in fine person village how to drive more than 15 minutes to various postal services the biggest discussed lie of primary school only 60% of the villagers have a primary school within the quarter of Drive where the remaining apologise of amiability of countryside have a drive to children on off school Overall the ruler and urban community have similar access to medical postal and secondary school but only afford the thought of village don’t have close primary school
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of amiability of countryside have a
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IELTS academic The chart shows the information related to the people within 15 minutes travel service is it practical region of in UK also compares the people living in the urban area and the people living in a ruler area right report for the university listen and the firm given below

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