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Task-1 The graph shows the chages in the emission of carbon dioxide in 4 European countries in the period from 1967 to 2007

Task-1 The graph shows the chages in the emission of carbon dioxide in 4 European countries in the period from 1967 to 2007 N8l5W
The graph provide information about on the median carbondioxide emissions in per person in metric tones clear thay namely portugal. Co2 emissions was 1/2 tonne o 1967 after that it was increasing in per person 2 tone on 1975 rather. it was just increasing in 1987 nearabout 4 tones. it's obvious that Co2 is increasing in per person year wise year and than 1977 it's reached on 4/4 on 2007 it could be seems 4/5 tones. Through it is true that on Itlay Co2 emissions become much higher per person in metric tones much more than portugal. It seems to us Co2 6/2 tones on 1977. After that it becomes higher. 1997 it arrived on 7/5 tone than 2001 it stayed there. Now we are talking about the metric tone Co2 of sweden. 1967 its appearing to us 8/2 tone. After few years it arrival on 10/2 tones and it decreased and comes on 6/2 tones. Few year ago it falling off very fastly on 2007. it is reached in 5/2 tones. In the same way united kingdom was also decreasing of his Co2 emission. At the same time it is gettig downfall on 1977 it's 9 tones. Like the previous point it's getting jut reduce on 1997 it's on 9 tones and 2007 it could be seems us to on 8/2 tones.
The graph provide information about on the median
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carbondioxide
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emissions
in per
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person
in metric
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tones
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clear
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thay
namely
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portugal
. Co2
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emissions
was 1/2 tonne o 1967 after that it was increasing in per
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person
2
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tone
on 1975
rather
.
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it
was
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just
increasing in 1987
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nearabout
4
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tones
.
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it
's obvious that Co2 is increasing in per
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person
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year
wise
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year
and
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than
1977
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it's
reached on 4/4 on 2007 it could be
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seems
4/5
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tones
. Through it is true that on
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Itlay
Co2
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emissions
become much higher per
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person
in metric
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tones
much more than
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portugal
. It seems to us Co2 6/2
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tones
on 1977. After that it becomes higher. 1997 it
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arrived on
7/5
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tone
than 2001 it stayed there.
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Now
we are talking about the metric
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tone
Co2 of
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sweden
. 1967 its appearing to us 8/2
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tone
. After few years
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it arrival
on 10/2
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tones
and it decreased and
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comes
on 6/2
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tones
. Few
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ago it falling off
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fastly
on 2007.
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it
is reached
in 5/2
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tones
.
In the same way
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united kingdom
was
also
decreasing of his Co2
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emission
. At the same time it is
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gettig
downfall on 1977
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it's
9
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tones
. Like the previous point
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it's
getting jut
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reduce
on 1997
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on 9
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tones
and 2007 it could be
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seems
us to on 8/2
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tones
.
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IELTS academic Task-1 The graph shows the chages in the emission of carbon dioxide in 4 European countries in the period from 1967 to 2007

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