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Task-1 Sale of three kinds of books from 2002 and 2006 in one country

Task-1 Sale of three kinds of books from 2002 and 2006 in one country R5RMW
It's given graph below illustrates the sales of three kinds of books adult fiction and educational childern's book from 2002 and 2006in one countryIts's clearly seen that the educational books showed a steady but significiant rise over the period, while the million dollars sale of adult fiction experienced a downward trend. In 2002 the sales of educational books anf childern's books were nearly 25 million dollar and 33 million dollar respectively. children's books increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding adult fiction in 2003, moreover it's decreasing and the again in the end of period reached almost 30 million dollars. In the meantime, the million dollar sales of 2003 41 million dollars and then remained steady until 2005. During 2005 to 2006 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 45 dollars and continued with a gradual increase to 65 million dollars in 2006In early the sales of adult fiction was the highest among these two books. however it dramatically declined to dollar 30 million in 2006. Then, there was a growth of these two books sharply, but adult fiction sale was the lowest in the end of the period
It's
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given
graph below illustrates the
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sales
of three kinds of
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books
adult
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fiction
and educational
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childern
's
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book
from 2002 and 2006in one
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countryIts
's
clearly
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seen
that the educational
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books
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showed
a steady
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but
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significiant
rise over the
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period
, while the
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million
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dollars
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sale
of adult
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fiction
experienced a downward trend. In 2002 the
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sales
of educational
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books
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anf
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childern
's
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books
were
nearly
25
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million
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dollar
and 33
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million
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dollar
respectively
.
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children
's
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books
increased
sharply
throughout the
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period
, exceeding adult
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fiction
in 2003,
moreover
it's decreasing and the again in the
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end
of
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period
reached almost 30
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million
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dollars
. In the meantime, the
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million
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dollar
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sales
of 2003 41
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million
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dollars
and then remained steady until 2005. During 2005 to 2006 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 45
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dollars
and continued with a gradual increase to 65
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million
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dollars
in 2006In early the
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sales
of adult
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fiction
was the highest among these two
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books
.
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however
it
dramatically
declined to
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dollar
30
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million
in 2006. Then, there was a growth of these two
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books
sharply
,
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but
adult
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fiction
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sale
was the lowest in the
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end
of the
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period

IELTS academic Task-1 Sale of three kinds of books from 2002 and 2006 in one country

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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