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The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006

The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 bQxj3
The given pie charts compare the popularity of five different sort of bookw according to the sales of a book seller during the period between 1972 and 2012Overall the popularity of adult book was escalate over the given period whereas, biography was performed the sales by seller from 1972 to 2012 In 1972, other type of book were the highest purchased by readers which account for a quater while books based on traveling were the least popular 15% amount all type of books other three type of book namely adult fiction, children's fiction and biography books shared of two fifth The 1992, sales of biography and other books were decreased marginally by 50% and reached at 15% and 20% respectively adult fiction books in contrast withessed and raised by 5% however the rate for traveling book and children's fiction books were two fifth
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according to the sales of a
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seller during the period between 1972 and 2012Overall the popularity of adult
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book
was escalate over the
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given
period whereas, biography
was performed
the sales by seller from 1972 to 2012 In 1972, other type of
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book
were the highest
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purchased
by readers which account for a
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quater
while
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books
based on traveling were the least popular 15% amount all type of
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books
other three type of
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book
namely
adult
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fiction
, children's
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fiction
and biography
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books
shared of two fifth The 1992, sales of biography and other
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books
were decreased
marginally
by 50% and reached at 15% and 20%
respectively
adult
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fiction
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books
in contrast
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withessed
and raised by 5%
however
the rate for traveling
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book
and children's
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fiction
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books
were two fifth
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IELTS academic The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006

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142 words
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