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the chart shows the annual GDP growth rates in 3 countries from 2007 to 2010.

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The bar chart shows information about the change in GDP per year in three countries from 2007 to 2010. Overall, the rate of GDP growth in Japan increased steadily over the period. However, the figures for the other two nations reduced gradually. In 2007, the annual GDP rate of Tunisa was the highest percentage of three groups, at about 6. 3%. Meanwhile, Japan was the lowest percentage with 2%. Until 2010, the GDP advance of Japan reached a peak of 6. 5% and that experienced a high rise. The Tunisa's GDP was contrasting to that of Japan, it declined slightly per term to 3%. From 2007 to 2010, the proportion of GDP growth in Ecuador saw a minor fluctuation. In 2008, Ecuador reached the highest point of approximately 5%. This figure of Ecuador was the lowest among the three countries (2%) in 2010.
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information about the
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in GDP per year in three countries from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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increased
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. In 2007, the annual GDP rate of
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Tunisa
was the highest percentage of three groups, at about 6. 3%. Meanwhile,
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was the lowest percentage with 2%. Until 2010, the GDP advance of
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Japan
reached a peak of 6. 5% and that experienced a high rise. The
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's GDP was contrasting to that of
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, it declined
slightly
per term to 3%. From 2007 to 2010, the proportion of GDP growth in Ecuador
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a minor fluctuation. In 2008, Ecuador reached the highest point of approximately 5%. This figure of Ecuador was the lowest among the three countries (2%) in 2010.
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