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The chart shows people on their managing finances

The chart shows people on their managing finances 1kyk7
The graph provided illustrates the percentage of people managing their finances. The graph shows 4 types of financial management being very organized, fairly organized, not very organized, not all organized. Overall, the graph shows that most people have fairly organized their financial management, while almost a quarter of the people surveyed in the graph being very organized in managing their finances, with people being not very organized coming in just behind by a bit, and a little percentage of the citizen not organizing their finances at all. The graph shows that 55% of people having their finances fairly organized while 21% of the people surveyed for the graph being very organized with managing their finances. People not being very organized of their financial management falls to 20% of the graph with the other 4% just falling to people who aren't organizing their financial managements at all.
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4 types of
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, not all organized.

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percentage of the citizen not organizing their
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