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the diagram illustrates the process to produce bricks

the diagram illustrates the process to produce bricks GL5po

The diagram depicts several steps how bricks are manufactured for the erection industry. Overall, there are seven main stages in this process, beginning with clay digging and ending with delivery. In the first step, the clay is dug up by a digger. Next, the clay is put on the metal grid and is ground into small species. Then, the clay is mixed with sand and water. After that, the mixture is put in a mould or a wire cutter and become bricks. The bricks are placed into a oven and dried from 24 to 48 hours. Next, they are heated in a kiln from moderate (200 to 980 degree) to high temperature (870 to 1300 degree). Then, the bricks are moved to a cooling chamber between 48 to 72 hours. Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to the consumers.

The diagram depicts several steps how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are manufactured
 for the erection

industry. Overall
, there are seven main stages in this process, beginning with clay

digging and ending with delivery.

In the first
 step, the clay is dug
 up by a digger. Next
, the clay is put
 on the metal

grid and is ground
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 species. Then, the clay is mixed
 with sand and water.

After that, the mixture is put
 in a Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 or a wire cutter and become bricks.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are placed
 into Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 oven and dried from 24 to 48 hours. Next
, they are
heated
 in a kiln from moderate (200 to 980 degree) to high temperature (870 to

1300 degree). Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a cooling chamber Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 48 and 72".between 48 and 72
between 48 to 72


hours. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are packed
 and delivered to the consumers. 