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The chart shows information of british age group people who giving charity in year of 1900 to 2010

The chart shows information of british age group people who giving charity in year of 1900 to 2010 K0aA1

The bar chart depicts about the proportion of UK people who donate money to Charity between 1990 and 2010. Overall, people of middle age they gave highest money to charity in past years. On the other hand, adults gave the lowest money in the past two years. To begin, in the year of 1990 young people donate only 15% and nearly 6% in the year of 2010. Age group of 26-35 they gave 30% in 1990 and around 24% in 2010. whereas, in 1990 Middle aged people they donate the most which was about in 42%, however in 2010 it became less the percentage was only 35%. From the chat we can see that older aged people they contribute 35% in 1990 but in 2010 it got raise nearly 38%. People age group of 65 they gave Charity 32% in 1990 and below 35% in 2010.

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