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Changes made throughout the years 2007 and 2010 in the city hospital

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These two maps indicate the changes that had been made in the city hospital in the past. Looking at the map of 2010, you can generally see a more complicated map compared to 2007. The staff and public car park used to be combined in 2007. However, it had been separated by the year 2010. Formerly, the bus stop had been located to the east of the hospital. In 2010, the bus station had been rebuilt in a different location and could be accessed both by the city road and the hospital road. Another noticeable change had been the erection of a roundabout located to the east of the hospital. Despite all of these changes, the main structure of the hospital building had remained the same. To summarize, it is evident that the city hospital had developed its functions throughout the years.
These two maps indicate the
changes
that had
been made
in the city
hospital
in the past. Looking at the map of 2010, you can
generally
see
a more complicated map compared to 2007.

The staff and public car park
used
to
be combined
in 2007.
However
, it had
been separated
by the year 2010.

Formerly
, the bus
stop
had
been located
to the east of the
hospital
. In 2010, the bus station had been rebuilt in a
different
location and could
be accessed
both by the city road and the
hospital
road. Another noticeable
change
had been the erection of a roundabout located to the east of the
hospital
. Despite all of these
changes
, the main structure of the
hospital
building had remained the same.

To summarize
, it is evident that the city
hospital
had developed its functions throughout the years.
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IELTS academic Changes made throughout the years 2007 and 2010 in the city hospital

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