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Colwick Arts Center from 2005 to today

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The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in Colwick Arts Center from 2005 to today. We can see that The Arts Center made many changes during this period, including new buildings and outdoor exhibition areas. In the past, there was a wasteland in the bottom of the Art Center, whereas now the outdoor exhibition and performance area are there. They planted lots of trees and built seating areas in this place. The galleries were merged into one and were relocated to the left of the Art Center. The meeting room was separated into two buildings and was replaced the snack bar. They were separated The concert hall and cinema, Then constructed two buildings in the top right-hand corner of the Centre. They also increased the size of The concert hall. So, it is clear that the Arts Centre changed and expanded during this past 16th years.
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during this period, including new buildings and outdoor exhibition areas. In the past, there was a wasteland in the bottom of the
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Art
Center, whereas
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the outdoor exhibition and performance area are there. They planted lots of trees and built seating areas in this place. The galleries
were merged
into one and
were relocated
to the
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left
of the
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Art
Center. The meeting room
was separated
into two buildings and
was replaced
the snack bar. They
were separated
The concert hall and cinema, Then constructed two buildings in the top right-hand corner of the
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Centre
. They
also
increased the size of The concert hall.
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clear
that the
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Arts
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Centre
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changed
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