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THE CHART SHOWS HOW EACH CITIES OF BRITIAN GIVE ALTERNATIVE CARENESSS ABOUT HEALTH SERVICES, EDUCATION AND TRAINING, AND AIR POLLUTION.

THE CHART SHOWS HOW EACH CITIES OF BRITIAN GIVE ALTERNATIVE CARENESSS ABOUT HEALTH SERVICES, EDUCATION AND TRAINING, AND AIR POLLUTION. BEFLAST COMES IN THE FIRST RANK OF HEALTH SERVICES WHILE CARDIFF AND LONDON COMES AT THE SEOND AND THIRD POSITION SCUSSIVELY. MANCHESTER RECORDS THE HIGHEST RATE AMONG BRITIAN CITIES, AS WELL AS IN POLLUTION LONDON HAS ACHIEVED THE SECOND. THIRD POLLUTED CITIY IS CARDIFF. LONDON AND GLASGOW SCSSESSFULY MANITAIN THEIR EDUCATION LCEVEL TO THE TOP OF THE EDGE, MOROVER, CARDIFF, BIRMINGHAM, BELFAST HACE GOT THE THIRD POINT EQUALLY. UNFORTUNATLY MANCHESTER COMES IN THE END OF THE CITIY LIST WHICH PAY ATTENTION OR CARRNESS TO EDUCATION.
THE CHART
SHOWS
HOW EACH CITIES OF
BRITIAN
GIVE ALTERNATIVE
CARENESSS
ABOUT HEALTH SERVICES, EDUCATION AND TRAINING, AND AIR POLLUTION.

BEFLAST
COMES
IN THE
FIRST
RANK OF HEALTH SERVICES WHILE CARDIFF AND LONDON
COMES
AT THE
SEOND
AND THIRD POSITION
SCUSSIVELY
.

MANCHESTER RECORDS THE HIGHEST RATE AMONG
BRITIAN
CITIES,
AS WELL
AS IN POLLUTION LONDON HAS ACHIEVED THE SECOND. THIRD POLLUTED
CITIY
IS CARDIFF.

LONDON AND GLASGOW
SCSSESSFULY
MANITAIN
THEIR EDUCATION
LCEVEL
TO THE TOP OF THE EDGE,
MOROVER
, CARDIFF, BIRMINGHAM, BELFAST
HACE
GOT
THE THIRD POINT
EQUALLY
.
UNFORTUNATLY
MANCHESTER
COMES
IN THE
END
OF THE
CITIY
LIST WHICH PAY ATTENTION OR
CARRNESS
TO EDUCATION.
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IELTS academic THE CHART SHOWS HOW EACH CITIES OF BRITIAN GIVE ALTERNATIVE CARENESSS ABOUT HEALTH SERVICES, EDUCATION AND TRAINING, AND AIR POLLUTION.

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