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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in millions from the UK who went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 and 1999, while the bar chart shows which countries were the most popular for UK residents to visit in 1999. Overall, it can be seen that visits to and from the UK increased, and that France was the most popular country to go to. To begin, the number of visits abroad by UK residents was higher than for those that came to the UK, and this remained so throughout the period. The figures started at a similar amount, around 10 million, but visits abroad increased significantly to over 50 million, whereas the number of overseas residents rose steadily to reach just under 30 million. By far the most popular countries to visit in 1999 were France at approximately 11 million visitors, followed by Spain at 9 million. The USA, Greece, and Turkey were far less popular at around 4, 3 and 2 million visitors respectively.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in
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millions
from the UK who went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 and 1999, while the bar chart
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shows
which countries were the most
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popular
for UK residents to
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visit
in 1999.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that
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visits
to and from the UK increased, and that France was the most
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popular
country to go to. To
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begin
, the number of
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visits
abroad by UK residents was higher than for those that came to the UK, and this remained
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so
throughout the period. The figures
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started
at a similar amount, around 10
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million
,
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but
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visits
abroad increased
significantly
to over 50
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million
, whereas the number of overseas residents rose
steadily
to reach
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just
under 30 million.

By far the most
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popular
countries to
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visit
in 1999 were France at approximately 11
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million
visitors, followed by Spain at 9
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million
. The USA, Greece, and Turkey were far less
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popular
at around 4, 3 and 2
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million
visitors
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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