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The graphs below show some trends in visits to the UK by overseas residents and visits overseas by UK residents between 1982 and 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

The first line-chart indicates the number of residents in millions who went abroad from the UK and those that came to the UK between 1982 and 2002, while the second graph provides information about the average length of stay spent by British and overseas residents at the same time period. Overall, it can be seen that the figure of two groups of residents to and from the UK both increased and the average length of stay during trips between two groups had a decline during the whole period. To begin, there is a higher amount of UK citizens who traveled abroad than the visitors who came to the UK. In 1982, the number of visits abroad from the UK stood at about twenty million before it rose rapidly and reached its peak at well over fifty million in 2002. Meanwhile, the figure for outbound visitors to the UK started at around ten million and then gradually grew to nearly twenty million for twenty years. Otherwise, more and more foreigners stay fewer nights out than UK people during their holidays. It is estimated that the average number of days of the UK residents group suffer a slight decrease from roughly thirteen days in 1982 to merely over ten days after twenty years. Similarly, there was a slow drop of three days of the mean of nights spent on holidays of foreigners to the end of the period in 2002.
The
first
line-chart indicates the number of
residents
in
millions
who went abroad from the UK and those that came to the UK between 1982 and 2002, while the second graph provides information about the average length of stay spent by British and overseas
residents
at the same time period.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that the figure of two groups of
residents
to and from the UK both increased and the average length of stay during trips between two groups had a decline during the whole period.

To
begin
, there is a higher amount of UK citizens who traveled abroad than the visitors who came to the UK. In 1982, the number of visits abroad from the UK stood at about twenty
million
before
it rose
rapidly
and reached its peak at well over fifty
million
in 2002. Meanwhile, the figure for outbound visitors to the UK
started
at around ten
million
and then
gradually
grew to
nearly
twenty
million
for twenty years.

Otherwise
, more and more foreigners stay fewer nights out than UK
people
during their holidays. It
is estimated
that the average number of days of the UK
residents
group suffer a slight decrease from roughly thirteen days in 1982 to
merely
over ten days after twenty years.
Similarly
, there was a slow drop of three days of the mean of nights spent on holidays of foreigners to the
end
of the period in 2002.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show some trends in visits to the UK by overseas residents and visits overseas by UK residents between 1982 and 2002

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  American English
3 paragraphs
238 words
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