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The chart shows British emigration to selected destination

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The bar graph gives information related to the British emigration from 2004 to 2007 to five countries Australia, Spain, New Zealandd, USA and France. Overall, the amount of polulation who imigrated to Australia is more than other four countries. Where as, less number of people shows interest to imigrate New Zealand and USA. The amount of imigrants to Australia in 2004 is 41 thousand and it increased to 51 thousand in 2006 with slightly decreased in 2005. Moreover, it again decreased to 45 thousand in 2007. In France the rate of emigrants coming from British is rapidally grown in 2005 to 35 thousand from 2004, and after that the numbers started falling down to 18 thousand in 2007. The number of population moving to Spain and New Zealand was dropping from 2004 to 2007. In Spain the number was 35 thousand in 2005 and dropped to 27 thousand till 2007 where in Nee Zealand, amount was slightly down from 24 thousand to 20 thousand from 2004 to 2007. USA shows rate in upward and downword. In 2004 it was 25, 000 down to 18, 000 till 2005 and again grown up to same 25000 in 2005 and again dropped to 20000.
The bar graph gives information related to the British emigration from 2004 to 2007 to five countries Australia, Spain, New
Zealandd
, USA and France.

Overall
, the amount of
polulation
who
imigrated
to Australia is more than other four countries.
Where as
, less
number
of
people
shows
interest to
imigrate
New Zealand and USA.

The amount of
imigrants
to Australia in 2004 is 41 thousand and it increased to 51 thousand in 2006 with
slightly
decreased in 2005.
Moreover
, it again decreased to 45 thousand in 2007. In France the rate of emigrants coming from British is
rapidally
grown in 2005 to 35 thousand from 2004, and after that the
numbers
started
falling down to 18 thousand in 2007.

The
number
of population moving to Spain and New Zealand was dropping from 2004 to 2007. In Spain the
number
was 35 thousand in 2005 and dropped to 27 thousand till 2007 where in
Nee
Zealand, amount was
slightly
down from 24 thousand to 20 thousand from 2004 to 2007. USA
shows
rate in upward and
downword
. In
2004 it
was 25, 000 down to 18, 000 till 2005 and again grown up to same 25000 in 2005 and again dropped to 20000.
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