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The picture provides us information about the improvement of SouthWest airport in the following year

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The picture provides us information about the improvement of SouthWest airport in the following year. In general, it can be seen that there will be considerable changes in the airport such as: new gates, cafe, ATM, car hire and some new facilities will also offer for both departing and arriving passengers. In more detail, we can see in recent year the airport just has a humble structure that is divided into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. At the entrance for marching passengers, there have a check-in area on the left side and a small café shop on the top right corner near by the security passport control. Additionally, passport control customs has some space. Eight gates are associated with a walkway on the north side of the airport. After renovating, ten more gates will be built to the northeast and northwest, and all gates will be connected with a sky train rather than a walkway. The café will be enthused to the left bottom, and the check-in counter will be substituted by a bag drop room and relocated to the last safe place. A new café and an ATM are predicted to build in the east of the airport. Some space on the right side of the airport will be extended that will be used for car hire. There will be two departures and two arrivals gates doors in the airport. Security, passport control, and customs will be unaffected. Furthermore, the future floor plans shows there also will have a shop above the security passport control.
The picture provides us information about the improvement of
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SouthWest
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airport
in the following year.

In general
, it can be
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seen
that there will be considerable
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changes
in the
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airport
such as: new
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gates
,
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cafe
, ATM, car hire and
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some
new facilities will
also
offer for both departing and arriving passengers.

In more detail, we can
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see
in recent year the
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airport
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just
has a humble structure that
is divided
into three segments: departures, arrivals, and the north side. At the entrance for marching passengers, there have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in area on the
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left
side and a
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small
café shop
The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the top right corner"?
on the top right corner
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near by
the security
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passport
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control
.
Additionally
,
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passport
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control
customs has
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some
space. Eight
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gates
are associated
with a walkway on the north side of the airport.

After renovating, ten more
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gates
will
be built
to the northeast and northwest, and all
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gates
will
be connected
with a sky train
rather
than a walkway. The café will
be enthused
to the
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left
bottom, and the
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check
-in counter will
be substituted
by a bag drop room and relocated to the last safe place. A new café and an ATM
are predicted
to build in the east of the
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airport
.
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Some
space on the right side of the
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airport
will
be extended
that will be
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used
for car hire. There will be two departures and two arrivals
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gates
doors in the
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airport
. Security,
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passport
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control
, and customs will
be unaffected
.
Furthermore
, the future floor plans
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shows
there
also
will have a shop above the security
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passport
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control
.
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