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build shopping mall in branfield

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The map illustrates the two possible sites for a new shopping complex in the city of Brandfield. Overall, the main difference between two sites is that it can be access by road or rail and their position relative to the housing estate and industrial estate. S1 is located to the north of the city between the residential area and the city centre. Moreover, transportations can easily approach the site because it is surrounded by a river, a road and a railway. On the other hand, S2 was placed at the bottom right of the map. Futhermore, it was in close to the downtown and industrial estate of Branfield. In addition, S2 was near the main road and railway but it is relatively far away from the housing area. In conclusion, both sites have a main road that near and passes through S1 and S2, lead to the customers can access to either location. Additionally, there is large Golf Course and a park to the west of Brandfield.

The map illustrates the two possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 for a new shopping complex in the city of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
.

Overall
, the main difference between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 is that it can be access by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 or rail and their position relative to the housing estate and industrial estate.

S1 is located
 to the north of the city between the residential area and the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. Moreover
, transportations can easily
 approach the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is surrounded
 by a river, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and a railway.

On the other hand
, S2 was placed
 at the bottom right of the map. Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Futhermore
, it was in close to the downtown and industrial estate of Possible spelling mistake found.Bran field
Branfield
. In addition
, S2 was near the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and railway This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is relatively
 far away from the housing area.

In conclusion
, both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 have a main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 that near and passes through S1 and S2, lead to the customers can access to either location. Additionally
, there is large Golf Course and a park to the west of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
. 